有市民向記者報(bào)料:網(wǎng)上有人代寫(xiě)暑假作業(yè), 且參與代寫(xiě)的學(xué)生大多是在校大學(xué)生!皹屖帧蓖嘎叮捍鷮(xiě)作業(yè)收入可觀。引起了各方說(shuō)法。你作為記者將此事報(bào)道在某教育報(bào)上。
學(xué)生
作業(yè)太多找人代勞很無(wú)奈。
家長(zhǎng)
強(qiáng)烈反對(duì)這種做法,只會(huì)耽誤孩子的學(xué)業(yè)。
老師
暑假作業(yè)應(yīng)因人而異:老師在布置作業(yè)時(shí)應(yīng)該根據(jù)不同成績(jī)的學(xué)生設(shè)置不同的作業(yè), 這樣既能對(duì)學(xué)生有所幫助也能減輕學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)。
專(zhuān)家
代寫(xiě)作業(yè)害人不淺。老師不能把暑假當(dāng)成學(xué)期的延伸,布置作業(yè)應(yīng)盡量少,讓學(xué)生在暑假得到充分的休息。
 
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
市民報(bào)料網(wǎng)上代寫(xiě)作業(yè)現(xiàn)象;
各方說(shuō)法。
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1. 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫

One possible version:
Some citizens told reporters that some do summer homework for middle school students on line and those who do homework for middle school students are mostly college students, who reveal that they are well paid by doing homework for others. The phenomenon has aroused different opinions . In many students' view, there is so much homework that they have no choice but to ask others to do it but parents strongly oppose the behaviour, saying that it will delay the children's studies. Some teachers suggest summer homework should vary from student to student and that teachers should assign different homework according to the student with different grades, thus not only helping them a little but also lessening their study burden. Some experts believe that doing homework for others does great harm to students and that teachers should give as little homework as possible and let the students have enough rest during the summer vacation instead of regarding summer vacation as the extension of the learning semester.

試題分析:首先要仔細(xì)審題,要點(diǎn)是以提綱形式出現(xiàn)的,做題時(shí)包括以下幾個(gè)方面:(1)層次結(jié)構(gòu),(2)句子的時(shí)態(tài)(3)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位,要點(diǎn)需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確,這加大了寫(xiě)作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化,適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒?jí)句式和高級(jí)詞匯,以提高書(shū)面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。因?yàn)橹荒苁褂?個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。又要包括所有的要點(diǎn),考生要多使用復(fù)雜句,一句話(huà)中多包含些信息。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少,比如do summer homework, have no choice but to, does great harm to,還運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如:In many students' view;thus等等。
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