Question

假如你是李明，最近你的朋友張華因考試不利情緒低落，學(xué)習(xí)消極應(yīng)付。請(qǐng)你用英語給他寫一封e-mail勸慰他，鼓勵(lì)他努力學(xué)習(xí)，并結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，提出應(yīng)采取的積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對(duì)方法。
詞數(shù)：100左右
Dear Zhang Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that_______________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear Zhang Hua，
I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your last exam. You are not the only one who seems to try his best but ends up with a failure in exams. Quite a number of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence and don’t want to study hard any longer. I’m sure you know that it’s unwise to do so because you might be left far behind.
I was once in the same situation as yours. Failure is the mother of success. In face of failure, what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or to ask the teachers for advice. Anyway, Rome is not built in a day. Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success. I truly hope I can be of some help to you.
Yours ever,
Li Ming

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