Question

最近，學(xué)生會對1000名學(xué)生進行了關(guān)于“你是否愿意在網(wǎng)上購物？”的一項調(diào)查, 調(diào)查結(jié)果見下表。請根據(jù)圖表所提供的信息寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的看法。
注意： 詞數(shù)120左右
你是否愿意在網(wǎng)上購物？

結(jié)果	64%愿意	36%不愿意
原因	1.方便, 在家可買到所需物品 2.網(wǎng)上商品比較便宜, 而且可選擇的品牌多	1. 害怕買到贗品 2. 擔(dān)心被騙錢

   
Do you prefer shopping on line?

Answer 1

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Do you prefer shopping on line?
Recently, our Students Union has carried out a survey among 1000 students about whether they prefer shopping on line. The results are as follows.
64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need even when they are staying at home. Besides, they believe that goods on line are cheaper, and they have a variety of brands to choose from.
However, 36% of the interviewees don’t want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money.
Personally, I prefer shopping on line for the sake of its convenience. But only by guarding against the disadvantages will more and more people choose to shop on line.

試題分析： 英語寫作是一個人英語綜合水平的體現(xiàn)。本篇寫作題材是社會現(xiàn)象的兩種不同觀點。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點及依據(jù)；第三段反方觀點及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點表達(dá)時要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思。考生應(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
點評：考生要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。寫作是一個厚積薄發(fā)的過程，是一項將積累釋放于一時的過程。積累越深厚，釋放就越精彩；積累越科學(xué)，釋放就越有效。