Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分15分）
假設(shè)你應(yīng)邀參見(jiàn)學(xué)校組織的“英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)師生座談會(huì)”， 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息， 用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的情況，并對(duì)學(xué)校今后的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)提出建議。

自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況	1. 英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的目的
	2. 英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的方法
	3. 課外自學(xué)的途徑
	……
對(duì)學(xué)校英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的建議	（請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點(diǎn)建議。）

注意：1.對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。
2.詞數(shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3.文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of l earning English with you.                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.  1) I’m interested in English, and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. 2)As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. 3) After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now, I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. 4) Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. 5) Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English contests and festivals.
Thank you for listening.

試題分析：考生如果想拿到高分，必須按照要求在作文中覆蓋試題規(guī)定的所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，完成試題任務(wù)，達(dá)到預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，考生應(yīng)該留心是否要點(diǎn)完整，是否有要點(diǎn)遺漏。在題示要點(diǎn)完整的前提下，考生可以以作文材料為中心進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。千萬(wàn)不要打破常規(guī)，追求所謂的標(biāo)新立異，因?yàn)檫@樣做，往往會(huì)適得其反，不但不能出色地完成書(shū)面表達(dá)的任務(wù)，而且最終拿不到自己心目中理想的作文分?jǐn)?shù)。這里應(yīng)該注意動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)及人稱(chēng)的變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，考生應(yīng)該盡可能地減少錯(cuò)誤，避免出現(xiàn)漢字、拼音、空格等低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤，盡量避開(kāi)自己使用起來(lái)沒(méi)有把握的單詞和句子。如果為了追求句式的變化而出現(xiàn)了一些本來(lái)可以避免的錯(cuò)誤，就得不償失了。在保證準(zhǔn)確的前提下，考生才可以考慮句式的變化，應(yīng)用較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。