Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn’t understand ＂real music＂. After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There he saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

Answer 1

【答案】

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years the violin. , I couldn’t understand ＂real music＂. After I graduated high school, a friend of mine suggested that we to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful . Now the guitar is the most part of my life and I practice it every day.

【解析】

第一處：learn→ learning 根據(jù)spend sth. (in) doing sth.結構，應將learn改為learning。

第二處：Therefore→ However 我花了十多年的時間學習小提琴，卻不能理解什么是＂真正的音樂＂。上下文之間存在轉折關系，且有逗號隔開，應使用副詞However。

第三處：at→ from 介詞from才是graduate的習慣搭配，graduate from意為＂從……畢業(yè)＂ 。

第四處：started→ start 動詞suggest表示＂建議＂時，其后的賓語從句要用＂should+動詞原形＂表示虛擬，should可以省略，故將started改為start。

第五處：that→ which ＂介詞+which＂引導定語從句，on which在從句中作時間狀語，相當于when。

第六處：he→ I 人稱代詞的邏輯錯誤。此處表示我看到一個人在彈吉他，故將he改成I。

第七處：去掉the 前有物主代詞my，則序數(shù)詞前無需定冠詞the。

第八處：choose前加to It takes sb. some time to do sth.是固定句型，表示＂某人做某事需要花費多少時間＂，其中it是形式主語，不定式短語是真正的主語。

第九處：model→ models several（幾個，若干）后接名詞復數(shù)。

第十處：importantly→ important 形容詞修飾名詞，故應將importantly改為important。