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12．目前，環(huán)保已經(jīng)成為社會(huì)關(guān)注的熱點(diǎn)．請(qǐng)結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，號(hào)召人們行動(dòng)起來，為環(huán)保做貢獻(xiàn)．請(qǐng)就此為校英語報(bào)刊寫一篇稿子．

What we should do in our daily life	◇travel in a green way
	◇turn off the electric products
	◇…
What the government should do	◇find out new ways to make energy
	◇…

注意：（1）內(nèi)容必須包括表格所給的信息，并提出至少2條建議，并說明理由；
（2）詞數(shù)：70左右；
（3）短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Now we are faced with serious problems．Therefore，something must be done to help the world．We can travel in a green way，such as going to school or work by bus or by bike．Also we can have the habit of turning off the electric products when we no longer use them．It's also necessary for governments to find out new ways to make energy instead of the old ones that bring pollution to the environment．I think they should stop factories from pouring dirty water into the rivers because clean water is really important to people's health．
As a member of the world，everyone should do something for the earch．
Protect the environment，start now!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是號(hào)召人們行動(dòng)起來，為環(huán)保做貢獻(xiàn)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．我們?cè)撟鍪裁矗壕G色出行，不用的時(shí)候關(guān)掉電器；
2．政府：創(chuàng)造新的能源；
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
no longer 不再
find out 找到
instead of 代替，而不是
stop sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事

【高分句型】
1，Also we can have the habit of ①turning off the electric products②when we no longer use them．
①turn off 關(guān)掉
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
2．①It's also necessary for governments to ②find out new ways to make energy③instead of the old ones④that bring pollution to the environment．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
②find out 找到
③instead of 代替，而不是
④that作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，that作為從句的主語，修飾前面的the old ones．
3．I think①they should ②stop factories from pouring dirty water into the rivers③because clean water is really important to people's health．
①think后接的是省略了that的賓語從句
②stop sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 Now we are faced with serious problems．Therefore，something must be done to help the world
     We can travel in a green way，such as going to school or work by bus or by bike．（綠色出行）Also we can have the habit of turning off the electric products when we no longer use them．【高分句型】（不用的時(shí)候關(guān)掉電器）It's also necessary for governments to find out new ways to make energy instead of the old ones that bring pollution to the environment．【高分句型】（找到新能源）I think they should stop factories from pouring dirty water into the rivers because clean water is really important to people's health．【高分句型】（阻止工廠的污染環(huán)境的行為）
     As a member of the world，everyone should do something for the earch．（號(hào)召）
     Protect the environment，start now!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性．完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．