分析 這是一篇提綱作文.內(nèi)容是以"My mother"為題介紹自己的母親和你們的真情故事.時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí).人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱.
寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文,即本文的寫作要點(diǎn):
1介紹:年齡,工作,外貌,能力,愛好
2她為我做的事
3我將會(huì)為她做什么
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語:
even though即使
grow up 長大
make sb+adj使某人怎么樣
like doing sth喜歡做某事
cook…for sb為某人做…
graduate from…從…畢業(yè)
【高分句型】
1.She bought ①whatever I needed for my study,②even though she didn't have much money.
①whatever無論什么.引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,作為buy的賓語.
②even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句.
2.I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.
that make her look still young是一定語從句,修飾先行詞clothes,關(guān)系詞that作為定語從句的主語,不可省略.
3.①M(fèi)ost importantly,I will stay with her②when I have free time.
①M(fèi)ost importantly最重要的
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句.
解答 My mother
We need love.We also need to love.The person I love most is my mother.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 41 years old.She is of medium build with long black hair.Shi is quiet.She is a history teacher in a middle school.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.(介紹)
She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study,even though she didn't have much money.【高分句型】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.(她為我做的事)
When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.【高分句型】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time.【高分句型】That's what she wants most,I think.(我將會(huì)為她做什么)
點(diǎn)評 本題是一篇圖表作文,圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式,比提綱作文線索顯得更簡潔明了,寫作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá),本題是介紹自己的母親,學(xué)生們有話可說,在寫作時(shí),要特別注意幾種情況的描述,不能逐句翻譯,同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思,恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語,讓文章顯得有條理,不雜亂.
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