Question

Mary是一位美國女學生，去年來到你校。你跟她相處很好，不久便成了朋友。Mary對漢語有濃厚的興趣，漢語講得好；她擅長數(shù)學，勤于作業(yè)；化學課上喜歡做實驗，但有時粗心大意；物理是她最喜歡的學科之一，成績優(yōu)秀；她樂于助人，大家都非常喜歡她。
請你用英語寫一篇以A friend of mine為題的短文，要求100詞左右。
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Answer 1

A Friend of Mine
Mary, who is a girl with good manners, came to our school last year. She is always ready to help others and therefore gets along very well with everyone else in her class, and we have made friends with each other.
Having a special interest in Chinese, Mary speaks the language very well. She does plenty of math exercises every day and is very good at the subject. She enjoys doing experiments in Chemistry, though sometimes she needs to be more careful. Physics is her favorite subject and she is one of the best students in this subject and her physics teacher is proud of her.
We love her very much.

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點說明】范文出現(xiàn)很多常見的詞組：Be ready to 樂于做…，gets along very well with 和…相處，made friends with 和…交朋友，be proud of 以…為榮，還有使用了一些句型：Mary, who is a girl with good manners, came to our school last year. 這句話用了定語從句， Having a special interest in Chinese, Mary speaks the language very well. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， She enjoys doing experiments in Chemistry, though sometimes she needs to be more careful. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句。