Question

假如你是小華, Jane是美國人。在她暑假中國游玩時你們相識,并成為好朋友。Jane回國后,你很想念她,于是給她寫了一封信,并且和她談了你對高一新生活的感受，信頭信尾均已給出。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely,
XiaoHua
內(nèi)容包括：
很高興與她成為朋友，離開后很想念她。
新學(xué)校的生活、學(xué)習(xí)情況與感受。
表達(dá)對她父母的問候，并請她明年你�？纯吹脑竿�。
要求：
詞數(shù)：100詞左右；

Answer 1

Dear Jane,
How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.
Give my best regards to your parents and I am looking forward to your visiting my school next year.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求向你的筆友Jane寫一封電子郵件。和她談?wù)勀銓Ω咭恍律�活的感受。要點都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。
【亮點說明】范文中有一些常用的短語：try my best to“盡力”， keep fit“保持健康”. Give my best regards to 代我向某人問好“，looking forward to ”盼望“，和一些句型：I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you.這句話用不定式的完成式， The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.這句話用了賓語從句。