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近年來(lái)中國(guó)中學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了 “出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)熱”，成千上萬(wàn)的中學(xué)生已經(jīng)去國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)，而許多其他學(xué)生還一直在設(shè)法出國(guó)，對(duì)此人們有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格提示，以Studying Abroad 為題寫一篇短文。

Advantages	Disadvantages
1. 與不同文化背景的人交友 2. 學(xué)習(xí)國(guó)外先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù) 3. 更快地學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)	1. 年紀(jì)小、缺乏生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)，自理能力差 2. 情感孤獨(dú)，思鄉(xiāng) 3. 生活和學(xué)習(xí)費(fèi)用高
你 自 己 的 看 法

注意：1．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容連貫；
2．詞數(shù)；120左右；開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
要點(diǎn)提示：先進(jìn)科學(xué)技術(shù)advanced knowledge of science and technology，生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)living experience
Studying Abroad
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Tens of thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study.

Answer 1

Studying   Abroad
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Tens of thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study. Many more are trying their best to go abroad. As for this, different people have different opinions.
There are many advantages in studying abroad. First, students who study abroad can make friends with people of different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries. Still, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themse lves without any living experience. Moreover, being far away from their motherland, they may eel lonely and homesick./ miss their families. And further, the high cost is also a problem for common families
In my opinion, it is advisable to take as many things into consideration .They can ask teachers or students who have studied abroad for advice and they should try to get everything ready before attending school abroad.

試題分析：這是闡述優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的議論文，話題是出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)熱的問(wèn)題。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述；優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)以及自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力�？忌鷳�(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語(yǔ)及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，句式富于變化：students who study abroad can make friends with people of different cultures.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience這句話用了too…to…結(jié)構(gòu)， being far away from their motherland, they may eel lonely and homesick./ miss their families. 這句話用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ)， In my opinion, it is advisable to take as many things into consideration .這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，They can ask teachers or students who have studied abroad for advice and they should try to get everything ready before attending school abroad.這句話用了并列句和定語(yǔ)從句還有動(dòng)名詞。還有范文使用了很多關(guān)聯(lián)詞，如First, Second, Still, On the other hand, . Moreover And further,使文章更加連貫。