Question

你剛進入高中新的學習生活，某英文報欲征集有關高一新生學習經驗的小短文.請以“How to Be a Good Learner”為題寫一篇英語短文。短文應包括以下要點：
① 學習方法的重要性，善學者學習效果好；② 有計劃，�？偨Y（sum up）; ③ 會用工具書（reference book），如查詞典，善用機會和資源(resource)，如問老師或同學等；④ 提前預習（preview），課堂認真聽講和課后及時復習（go over）；⑤ 成功的秘訣：勤奮加方法。
注意：不要直接翻譯要點，可適當增加細節(jié)；詞數：100詞左右。 注意書寫要整潔干凈。
How  to   Be  a  Good  Learner
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Answer 1

How to Be a Good Learner
Learning methods are very important to every student. Usually a good learner gets twice the result with half the effort. Now I'd like to share my opinions about learning methods with you.
To be a good learner, you should have a good study plan and you have to sum up what you have learned often. You can solve problems with the help of reference books, such as a dictionary. You ought to seize every chance to learn and make use of all kinds of learning resources. You can ask teachers or your classmates for help when you meet with some difficulties., Besides, preview your new lessons, listen to the teachers carefully in class and go over the old lessons on time.
Remember that diligence and good methods are the key to success.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文：要求寫一份有關高一新生學習經驗的小短文，要點給的很全面細致，因此考生首先要根據所給提綱和要點，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】 Usually a good learner gets twice the result with half the effort. 這句話是倍數的表達， To be a good learner, you should have a good study plan and you have to sum up what you have learned often. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語和名詞性從句， You ought to seize every chance to learn and make use of all kinds of learning resources. 這句話用了高級詞匯seize和詞組make use of利用，You can ask teachers or your classmates for help when you meet with some difficulties., preview your new lessons, listen to the teachers carefully in class and go over the old lessons on time. 這句話用了時間狀語從句，     Remember that diligence and good methods are the key to success. 這句話用了賓語從句和詞組the key to success成功的關鍵。還有文章還使用了Besides,怎樣的關聯詞，使文章更加連貫。