Question

下面是某中外合資企業(yè)刊登在昨天的China Daily上的一則廣告：
Office secretary(辦公秘書)， with experience in bookkeeping, typewriting, public relations, operating PC (personal computer).  Address,  age,  health condition.
Write to A518, Charlie Office.
假如你是張林，現(xiàn)年20歲，身體健康，學習英語6年，學過廣告中所列項目。通信地址是濱海市745信箱（P.O.Box745）。請根據(jù)廣告中提出的招聘職務、應聘條件和你自己的簡要情況，寫一封自薦信。字數(shù)：120詞左右。
Dear Sir,
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Yours;
Zhang Ling

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
I have read your advertisement in yesterday’s China Daily. I feel I am qualified for the job in your company. I’m 20 years old and in good health. After graduation from a middle school, I studied English for six years. I also learned bookkeeping, typewriting and public relations. I’m good at operating PC and have a good command of English. I’m interested in the position of a secretary. I want very much to be accepted by your company. I’ll work hard if I can be a member in your company.
Yours,
Zhang Ling

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。要求根據(jù)廣告中提出的招聘職務、應聘條件和你自己的簡要情況，寫一封自薦信，要點都已經(jīng)給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。
點評：書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。