Question

請根據以下信息寫一篇英語短文，簡單描述一下1923年發(fā)生在日本的地震。
1. 地震于1923年發(fā)生在日本橫濱市(Yokohama)；
2. 當時人們正在睡覺，并不知道地震發(fā)生；
3. 大量的房屋、建筑物倒塌，水電供應中斷；
4. 有140,000多人喪生，還有很多受傷者和無家可歸者；
5. 是歷史上最嚴重的地震之一。
要求：
1. 短文必須包括要點中的所有內容；
2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使內容連貫；
3. 詞數：100左右。

Answer 1

In 1923, a big earthquake hit the city of Yokohama, a city in Japan. It happened at night when most people were sleeping. When the earthquake happened, it seemed that the world was at an end. Houses and tall buildings fell down. Water and electricity were cut off. There were fires and smoke everywhere. In a few seconds the whole city was almost destroyed and lay in ruins. The number of people who were killed reached more than 140,000. Besides, a large number of people were injured and lost their homes. It was one of the biggest earthquakes in history.

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達的寫作。要點都已經給出，根據要點寫描述一下1923年發(fā)生在日本的地震的情況，要點包括地震的細節(jié)，具體內容提綱中都已經給出來了，寫作時要把要點都包括進去，不要有遺漏，審題時注意本文使用的時態(tài)，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述。如范文里面的When the earthquake happened, it seemed that the world was at an end 和In a few seconds the whole city was almost destroyed and lay in ruins.還有要用適當的關聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來：如besides等等。
點評：提綱類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。