Question

請用英語寫一篇100個詞左右的短文，記述一件發(fā)生在你身上（邊）的助人為樂的事跡。要求如下：
1. 描述事情經(jīng)過；   2. 談談你的感想。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Last Saturday, some of my classmates and I went to the Qiandao lake for some refreshment.  Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors. He was apparently having great difficulty collecting some small items, especially cigarette butts. An idea struck me. Why not help him collect litter? Much to my joy, all my classmates agreed and were willing to help. So we worked hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish. Then we parted and waved farewell to the thankful dustman.
Dog-tired as I was, I felt really happy. As the saying goes, helping hands are more sacred than praying lips. I truly believe we’d have a more harmonious society if everybody took action. What a fine deed!

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于記敘文的寫作范疇,在寫作時要注意記論文的六要素,即時間、地點、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果等,都要在文中給予清楚明白地表達。在敘述事情經(jīng)過時，要寫清事情發(fā)生與發(fā)展的過程以及事情發(fā)生的前因后果等,但是要詳略得當,分清主次。同時要注意使用一般過去時來敘述過去發(fā)生的事情,而且應使用第一人稱。.此外要盡量發(fā)揮想象力,使用自己熟悉的詞語與句型將其擴展成篇,擴展時要注意要求的字數(shù)，防止由于字數(shù)不夠而引起的扣分。
【亮點說明】文章在結(jié)構安排上簡單明了,使用兩個段落分別講述發(fā)生的事情和自己的感受, 結(jié)構清晰,層次分明。作者使用了多種句式使文章語言生動,形象.富于變化,比如疑問句Why not help him collect litter? 讓步狀語從句Dog-tired as I was,定語從句 As the saying goes,等。.此外諺語helping hands are more sacred than praying lips.和一些高級詞匯 refreshment, apparently, struck, farewell parted的使用也是文章的一大亮點,顯示了作者詞匯的豐富和對詞語的準確把握能力..