Question

最近你班將舉行一場題為 Life in the future 的討論會， 請根據(jù)以下要點， 寫一篇一百詞左右的短文。
1. 隨著醫(yī)學的發(fā)展，人類的平均壽命將會達到120歲。
2. 由于新能源的出現(xiàn)，污染問題將得到控制。
3. 人們的日常生活也將有很大的變化。 如機器人可以為你做家務；椅子的顏色能夠隨著你所穿的衣服而改變；手機可以帶在手腕上， 通話時可以看到對方；可以乘坐新型的電梯進入太空度假。（手腕 wrist  電梯 elevator）
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Answer 1

As time goes on, life in the future will be very different from that of today.
First, with the development of medicine, people will live to the age of 120 or so on the average. Second, because of the discovery of new energy, the environmental pollution will be under control. Third, people’s daily life will change greatly, as well. For example, robots will do all your housework for you; your chair will change its color to match what you’re wearing; you can also put your mobile phone around your wrist and can see the caller while talking; you can even take a new type of elevator into space for your holidays.
In a word, we are looking forward to an exactly new world in the future.

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)討論會的結果寫一篇短文。寫作要點已經(jīng)列出，但不能簡單的照著翻譯，應該有所展開，多使用高級詞匯和重要句型以及語法知識，像定語從句、賓語從句、狀語從句、倒裝等。另外，注意人、時態(tài)、拼寫和標點的正確使用。
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