Question

【題目】最近，我國許多城市出現(xiàn)了嚴重的霧霾天氣。假設你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括；

1. 霧霾天氣出現(xiàn)的危害（使能見度降低，進而影響交通，對人體健康也有危害）

2. 霧霾天氣出現(xiàn)的原因（大氣污染，汽車尾氣，…等）；

3. 避免出現(xiàn)霧霾天氣的措施（較少大氣污染，植樹造林，等等）。

注意； 1.詞數(shù)120 左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯 ；霧霾 haze.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, many cities of China were enveloped in a thick haze. Haze can cause great trouble to us. On one hand, it makes people unable to see things far away and thus affects traffic. On the other hand, haze can do harm to people’s health.

It is reported that haze is caused by many factors, of which air pollution is a major one. In order to avoid haze, we should take measures immediately. First, we should reduce air pollution. We can use public transportation instead of private cars and use clean energy. Second, we should plant more trees and grass to produce more fresh air. Only in this way can we bring back the blue sky.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在表達要點時，要注意條理清楚，層次分明。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等。同時在列舉要求的時候要使用合適的連接詞，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。

【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些高級詞匯：were enveloped in包圍，a thick haze厚厚的陰霾，unable to不能， take measures采取措施，instead of而不是。運用了固定句型：On one hand，一方面，On the other hand另一方面； It is reported that據(jù)報道。范文中的句式多變，運用了不同的語法知識：Only in this way can we bring back the blue sky.運用了倒裝句型；In order to avoid haze, we should take measures immediately.運用了目的狀語。