Question

2．假定你是李華．你和其他五位同學即將于下周代表學校參加惠州市"英語經(jīng)典美文誦讀比賽"，請給外教Mr．Black寫一封信，請他在選材、語音、語調(diào)及朗誦技巧方面為你們做些指導．
參考詞匯：
英語經(jīng)典美文誦讀比賽 Classical English Literature Recital Competition   語調(diào) intonation
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭語和結(jié)語已為你寫好．
Dear Mr．Black，
I am Li Hua，one of your students in Senior One．I am writing to share the exciting news with you that my five classmates and I will take partin the Classical English Literature Recital Competitionof Huizhou on behalf of our school next week．（高分句型一）Hoping to be well prepared for this important competition，we are wondering whether it is convenient for you to spare your valuable time to give us some instruction．（高分句型二）
We would bevery grateful if you could give us some guidance on the following things．We have already selected some classical poems，but would you please help us decide the best one for reciting？And your necessary correctionson our pronunciation and intonationwill be of great value to us．Most importantly，what we need are the skills of recitation，which we believe will perfect our performance under your guidance．（高分句型三）We would appreciate it very much if you could take some time to guide us through all these difficulties．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華．你和其他五位同學即將于下周代表學校參加惠州市"英語經(jīng)典美文誦讀比賽"，請給外教Mr．Black寫一封信，請他在選材、語音、語調(diào)及朗誦技巧方面為你們做些指導，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：take part in參加；be well prepared for 為…做好準備；be of great value 非常有價值；Most importantly更重要的是；
I am writing to share the exciting news with you that my five classmates and I will take part in the Classical English Literature Recital Competition of Huizhou on behalf of our school next week．（高分句型一）
Hoping to be well prepared for this important competition，we are wondering whether it is convenient for you to spare your valuable time to give us some instruction．（高分句型二）
Most importantly，what we need are the skills of recitation，which we believe will perfect our performance under your guidance．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Black，
I am Li Hua，one of your students in Senior One．I am writing to share the exciting news with you that my five classmates and I will take part in the Classical English Literature Recital Competition of Huizhou on behalf of our school next week．（高分句型一）Hoping to be well prepared for this important competition，we are wondering whether it is convenient for you to spare your valuable time to give us some instruction．（高分句型二）
 We would be very grateful if you could give us some guidance on the following things．We have already selected some classical poems，but would you please help us decide the best one for reciting？And your necessary corrections on our pronunciation and intonation will be of great value to us．Most importantly，what we need are the skills of recitation，which we believe will perfect our performance under your guidance．（高分句型三）We would appreciate it very much if you could take some time to guide us through all these difficulties．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．