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3．假設(shè)你是李華，你要給十年后的自己寫一封信，請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)和你的暢想完成短文．（1）家庭；（2）工作；（3）業(yè)余生活．
注意：（1）次數(shù)100左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Li Hua，
I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do （工作）．【高分句型】In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．（業(yè)余生活）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．【高分句型】
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

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分析 本題屬于提綱類作文．你要給十年后的自己寫一封信，請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)和你的暢想完成短文．（1）家庭；（2）工作；（3）業(yè)余生活，因?yàn)樘崾拘畔⑤^少，所以要充分發(fā)揮想象，增加適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，內(nèi)容充實(shí)．在寫作時(shí)要注意本文使用的應(yīng)該是一般將來時(shí)，也要注意多種句式的使用．
這是一篇向報(bào)社投稿的文章．材料中已經(jīng)給出了要點(diǎn)：家庭，工作和生活．因此圍繞著這三點(diǎn)進(jìn)行構(gòu)思寫作．首先按照順序描寫未來的家庭，然后寫工作，最后想象業(yè)余生活．這樣行文就比較流暢，自然，符合寫作的要求等．
本文使用了一些高級的詞匯和短語：get along  with sb與某人相處；in one's free time在某人的空閑的時(shí)候；such as 例如；continue to do sth繼續(xù)做某事；in a word 總之
【高分句型】
1．I'will ①do a good job in②whatever I do．
①do a good job in在某方面做的好．
②whatever I do．作為介詞in的賓語從句．
2．①In a word，my life will be ②much richer and more colorful．
①in a word 總之．
②much修飾比較級，表程度．

解答 Dear Li Hua，
        I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do （工作）．【高分句型】In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．（業(yè)余生活）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．【高分句型】
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．