Question

假設你是大一學生王林，你的母校�？�編輯邀請你給高三的同學寫一封公開信，請你根據以下要點回信：
1.你自己高三時學習方面的變化；
2.你自己高三時生活方面的變化；
3.你對高三同學的建議（至少兩點）。
注意：1.內容包括以上要點，但不要逐句翻譯；
2.字數120左右，文章開頭已提供，不計入總詞數。
Dear fellows,
I’m really glad to share my thoughts with you.                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours,
Wang Lin

Answer 1

Dear fellows,
I’m really glad to share my thoughts with you. I will give a brief description about my previous experience and offer some suggestions as well.
It was true that great changes took place since entering senior three. On one hand, I studied much harder since I knew time was limited. What made me excited was that I did make great progress after a period of full devotion to study. On the other hand, my life also changed a lot. To ensure energy and efficiency during the day, I made a more practical schedule and strictly follow it every day, which led to a more regulated life and really benefited me a lot.
As for my suggestions, the following tips may help. First of all, remember to persist whatever difficulty you meet. Besides, communicate more with your classmates, teachers and parents, from whom you can definitely gain support in all aspects.
Best wishes to all of you.
Yours,
Wang Lin.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假設你是大一學生王林，你的母校�？�編輯邀請你給高三的同學寫一封公開信，請你根據以下要點回信：1.你自己高三時學習方面的變化；2.你自己高三時生活方面的變化；3.你對高三同學的建議（至少兩點）。需要寫的內容已經給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】It was true that great changes took place since entering senior three.這里含有一個主語從句；What made me excited was that I did make great progress after a period of full devotion to study.這里含有一個主語從句和一個表語從句。