Question

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)在人們生活中的廣泛使用，在生日或其他重大節(jié)日時(shí)，越來越多的好友或家人喜歡通過發(fā)送電子賀卡來表達(dá)他們的祝愿。根據(jù)以下提示，簡述使用電子賀卡的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />使用便捷，傳遞速度快，不受時(shí)空限制；
形式多樣，生動(dòng)有趣；
節(jié)約資源，利于環(huán)保。
文章應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。
參考詞匯：電子賀卡：e-card (electronic card)
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Answer 1

With the wide use of the Internet in our daily life, more and more students tend to send electronic cards to friends and family members on the occasions of their birthdays or festivals.
Compared with paper cards, electronic ones have many advantages. Firstly, it's more convenient and quicker to send and receive them as well, without being limited by time and space. Secondly, they take various forms of motion pictures, music and so on, which is more interesting and lively. Most importantly, electronic cards are more environmentally friendly and helpful to save both labor and natural resources.
For me, due to reminders from QQ, I've never missed any chances to say "Happy birthday" to my friends and grandparents far away via electronic cards. I have to say it is just the Internet that is making my life more colorful and comfortable.

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給的提示，簡述使用電子賀卡的優(yōu)點(diǎn)并談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。作文布局可以分三段，第一段總述現(xiàn)象；第二段寫賀卡的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第三段寫自己的觀點(diǎn)。注意時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)和語法的正確使用。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了較多的短語more and more, on the occasions of, as well, For me, due to, far away等，使作文內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)；
范文注意使用Firstly, Secondly, Most importantly來表示列舉，使作文條理清晰、更有說服力；
范文使用的重要語法知識有：固定搭配both...and...；固定搭配tend to send...；with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)With the wide use of the Internet...；非謂語動(dòng)詞Compared with paper cards,定語從句which is more interesting and lively；強(qiáng)調(diào)句型it is just the Internet that...。語法知識的運(yùn)用非常靈活。