Question

假如你是李華，你校外教Johnny準(zhǔn)備周末去附近的云霧山探險(xiǎn)旅游，寫(xiě)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)注意事項(xiàng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示，給他回一封電子郵件。
1. 準(zhǔn)備一張?jiān)旗F山的地圖；
2. 查詢(xún)當(dāng)?shù)貙?shí)時(shí)天氣，帶上必要的衣物、食品、藥品及手電筒( flashlight)；
3. 必要的話(huà)，找一位向?qū)А?br />注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Johnny,
I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.                             ___________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Johnny,
I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.
First of all, you should prepare a local map of Yunwu Mountain. Before starting, you should surf the Internet to look for some information about the weather on the weekend there so as to take enough clothes and food. Meanwhile, it’s necessary to take a flashlight and some medicines. Because there are few people living in the mountain, it’s good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together. If a local guide will serve you, it will be even better.
Special care should be taken while you travel in the mountain. I wish you a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查書(shū)信類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作。是關(guān)于你校外教Johnny準(zhǔn)備周末去附近的云霧山探險(xiǎn)旅游，寫(xiě)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)注意事項(xiàng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示，給他回一封電子郵件，具體信息已經(jīng)給出，考點(diǎn)只需要適當(dāng)串聯(lián)即可，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)要注意使用英語(yǔ)句型，也要使用倒裝句，定語(yǔ)從句等特殊的句式來(lái)提高文章的多樣性。如Because there are few people living in the mountain, it’s good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together.還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句與句連起來(lái)，如：  First of all，meanwhile等
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，此類(lèi)作文雖然好寫(xiě)，但是要寫(xiě)出特色是很不容易的。關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化。