（本短文10處需要改動，其中有8處需要改錯，一處需要添詞，一處需要刪詞）
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colorfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.


【小題1】then 改when
【小題2】I 后面加am
【小題3】attracts改attract
【小題4】colourfully 改colourful或colorful
【小題5】stopped改 stop
【小題6】attention 后面的to 改on
【小題7】the pop music前面的the 去掉.
【小題8】their 改her
【小題9】which改that
【小題10】age 改ages

解析試題分析：本文講述了作者喜歡的音樂很多，尤其是流行歌曲。而作者的母親像大多數(shù)成年人那樣，她喜歡的民歌。不同年齡段的人以不同的方式理解音樂，享受不同種類的音樂，這是音樂的一個真理。
【小題1】句意：每天晚上當我正在做作業(yè)。此處應是表示當……的時候，所以then 改when。
【小題2】句意：在周末的時候我在家里。主語I，后面缺少聯(lián)系動詞be，所以I 后面加am。
【小題3】句意：熟悉的模式吸引了我進入音樂的多彩世界。主語是復數(shù)形式，所以attracts改attract。
【小題4】句意：熟悉的模式吸引了我進入音樂的多彩世界。world of music前面應該用形容詞形式，所以colourfully 改colourful或colorful。
【小題5】句意：現(xiàn)在，然后我停下來跟歌曲。表示泛指的在上下午用in，所以On—in。
【小題6】句意：要我把注意力集中到我的家庭作業(yè)上。fix attention on sth把注意力集中到……上，因此attention 后面的to 改on。
【小題7】 句意：她不喜歡流行音樂。music是抽象名詞，所以前面不加定冠詞the。
【小題8】句意：因為平靜的音樂讓她想起了她年輕時美麗的生活。從上下文可知，their 改her。
【小題9】句意：不同年齡段的人以不同的方式理解音樂，享受不同種類的音樂，這是音樂的一個真理。此句中that引導的從句是主語從句，that只起連接作用，故which改that。
【小題10】句意：不同年齡段的人以不同的方式理解音樂，享受不同種類的音樂，這是音樂的一個真理。不同年齡是復數(shù),所以age 改ages。
考點：短文改錯。

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