假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
I’m much sorry that I can’t go back home for Mother’s Day next week. This is why I have to go to an important meeting for my boss, who helps me a lot my work and life here. But I’ll find time to seeing you soon. Mom, thank you for which you have done for Tim and me. After Dad died ten year ago, you had to work in a supermarket in the daytime and in a restaurant at the night. Though you don’t have to work now, I can still remember when you came home, you always felt tiring. Tim said he will look for a job near our home. I’m glad you won’t live by myself any more in the future.


【小題1】much—very
【小題2】why—because
【小題3】help me a lot后加with
【小題4】to seeing –to see
【小題5】.for which—for what
【小題6】year—years
【小題7】at the night 去掉the
【小題8】 tiring—tired
【小題9】will—would
【小題10】myself--yourself

解析試題分析：文章是孩子寫給媽媽的信，告知母親節(jié)不能回家以及原因，并對(duì)這么多年的養(yǎng)育之恩表示感謝。
【小題1】我非常抱歉下周的母親節(jié)不能回家了。Much修飾不可數(shù)名詞，改成very修飾形容詞sorry。
【小題2】這是因?yàn)槲乙獮槔习彘_一個(gè)重要的會(huì)議。這是對(duì)上文deep解釋。That is why…“那就是為什么…”，而That is because…那就是因?yàn)椤?br />【小題3】他對(duì)我在這里的工作和生活有很大幫助。使用短語(yǔ)：help sb. with sth.
【小題4】但是我會(huì)找時(shí)間去看你的。這里使用的是不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)。to seeing –to see
【小題5】媽媽，因?yàn)槟銥樘崮泛臀易龅氖虑楦兄x您。For后面是賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句中缺少賓語(yǔ)，用what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句。
【小題6】year是可數(shù)名詞，10年是10 years。
【小題7】考查詞組。“在晚上”at night，所以at the night 去掉the。
【小題8】我總是記得當(dāng)你回來(lái)的時(shí)候，你總是感到很累。Tiring一般修飾物，而tired一般修飾人。
【小題9】提姆說(shuō)他會(huì)在家附近找個(gè)工作。主句是said從句謂語(yǔ)用相應(yīng)的過去式。will—would
【小題10】我很難高興以后你不需要一個(gè)人生活了。主語(yǔ)是you，所以反身代詞是yourself。
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