Question

TEMPORARY JOB OFFERS
MAJOR CATERING COMPANY has five temporary jobs as waiters. For more information, write to Ms Kate Rees, 17 Park End St.
假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，得知《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》刊登招聘臨時(shí)服務(wù)員的信息，你有意應(yīng)聘，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)給報(bào)社寫一封自薦信。
1. 年齡20 
2. 可以工作時(shí)間：六月到七月之間
3. 說(shuō)明你的優(yōu)勢(shì)及相關(guān)經(jīng)歷 
4. 希望得到回復(fù)
注意：    1. 詞數(shù)：100左右             2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for a temporary position as a waiter. I am a 20-year-old student and would be able to work during June and July.
I do not have any experience but I enjoy working with people and am interested in a career in the catering industry when I leave university.
I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是封應(yīng)聘信，應(yīng)聘信屬于公務(wù)信函，格式和用詞比較規(guī)范。信的內(nèi)容大體上分為三部：①寫信的目的，②自我介紹，③要求。寫作時(shí)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：①寫信的目的要直截了當(dāng)?shù)卦谛诺拈_頭提出。②自我介紹部分主要介紹自己的學(xué)歷、工作經(jīng)歷、解決問(wèn)題的能力等等。在行文、用詞上要表現(xiàn)出自信、懇切的態(tài)度，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)明扼要，突出介紹自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，與眾不同的特長(zhǎng)或有利條件。還要緊扣用人單位的需求，巧用詞語(yǔ)，說(shuō)服對(duì)方，此職非你莫屬。③最后提出進(jìn)一步聯(lián)系的途徑，如：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)。還可以主動(dòng)提出接受面試。④求職信在寫作特點(diǎn)上主要用第一人稱以及動(dòng)詞的一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文很簡(jiǎn)潔，但是要點(diǎn)齊全，也有些好的詞組和句子：in response to回應(yīng)，enjoy doing 喜歡做…，be interested in對(duì)…感興趣，looking forward to盼望，hear from收到…來(lái)信， I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available.這句話用了if條件句。