Question

近幾年來，越來越多的人們開始意識(shí)到愈演愈烈的環(huán)境污染問題。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下表提示以“Protect the Environment”為題寫篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)看法。

環(huán)境問題	空氣和水的嚴(yán)重污染；過度砍伐樹木。
保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性	生態(tài)平衡正在被破壞，由此，人類的生存也正在面臨威脅。
我的看法	……

 生態(tài)的 a. ecological 威脅 v. threaten

Answer 1

Protect the Environment
Environmental pollution has become more and more serious in recent years. The pollution of air and water is especially severe, which will do great harm to people’s health. What’s more, a great number of trees have been cut down. The whole ecological balance of the Earth is being damaged nowadays, so people’s existence is also being threatened. So it becomes more and ore important to protect the environment.
In my opinion, to protect the environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. For instance it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Furthermore, each person should take part and make small changes like taking public transport and so on. Let’s take action together from now on.

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。