Question

酒駕是一個談?wù)摵芫玫脑掝}。酒駕釀成的悲劇一直在發(fā)生，盡管國家出臺了嚴(yán)厲的法規(guī)，但是依舊屢禁不止。前有高曉松，近有王志文，這些名人大腕們都沒能避免。請你針對酒駕這一現(xiàn)象，給報社寫一篇英文書信，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />要求：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫、通順。
參考詞匯：酒駕：drunk driving
Dear Sir,
Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently.
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Answer 1

Dear Sir,
Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently. Even some famous persons like Gao Xiaosong and Wang Zhiwen involved in.
I am opposed to drunk driving and severer punishment is necessary. For one thing, bans on drunk driving help protect the safety of others and their wealth. If someone drives after drinking, it is a great danger to all the others. For another, bans on drunk driving are helpful to the drivers themselves. As we all know, many drivers lose their lives because of drunk driving every year, which also makes their family into great trouble.
Thus, in my opinion, anyone mustn’t drive after drinking wine, let alone drunk driving. Remember: never drive you car after drinking and drive without drinking forever.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文講述的話題是酒駕；已經(jīng)給出了部分的文字提示，考生可以從目前的實際情況出現(xiàn)，酒駕屢禁不止，名人先后違紀(jì)。直接表達(dá)作者認(rèn)為應(yīng)該從嚴(yán)從重處理，因為這樣是對生命的尊重。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點評：半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。