Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. ＂He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.＂ That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

Answer 1

【答案】

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, he works from morning till night. Hard work made him very ill. ＂He has ruined his . We are worried about him.＂ That is other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as as we missed him.

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