Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號() 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last Friday, the English class was going on while our English teacher suddenly slip and fell off the stage, which shocked all the students.

Without hesitate, I, under the help of Tom and Mary, carried her on my back to the clinic. All the others classmates waited anxiously in the classroom. It turned out that her right leg broken and she had to stay in the hospital.

After school, we all went to see her. She told me the injury was not severe, but we hoped she would recover soon!

Three days later, we were surprised to see that she was back in a wheelchair. We were joy and deeply moved, clapping and cheering for a long time.

Answer 1

【答案】

Last Friday, the English class was going on our English teacher suddenly and fell off the stage, which shocked all the students.

Without, I, the help of Tom and Mary, carried her on my back to the clinic. All the classmates waited anxiously in the classroom. It turned out that her right legbroken and she had to stay inthehospital.

After school, we all went to see her. She told the injury was not severe, we hoped she would recover soon!

Three days later, we were surprised to see that she was back in a wheelchair. We were and deeply moved, clapping and cheering for a long time.

【解析】

【1】while改為when 考查連詞辨析。while當(dāng)……時(shí)（表在……期間）；when當(dāng)……時(shí)（一般表瞬間，就在那時(shí)）。句意：上周五，當(dāng)我們的英語老師突然滑倒的時(shí)候，正在上英語課。故while改為when。

【2】slip改為slipped 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)句中時(shí)間狀語last Friday可知，此處描述的是過去的動(dòng)作。故slip改為slipped。

【3】hesitate改為hesitation 考查介詞搭配。without為介詞，其后應(yīng)接名詞、代詞或名詞化的詞（組）。故hesitate改為hesitation，hesitation不可數(shù)。

【4】under改為with 考查介詞搭配。with one’s help在某人的幫助下。故under改為with。

【5】others改為other 考查指代詞。others=other+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表“其他的……”。故others改為other。

【6】leg和broken之間加was 考查動(dòng)詞語態(tài)。句意：結(jié)果她的右腿骨折了。her right leg與break之間為邏輯動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，應(yīng)使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)且因?yàn)楸疚闹饕�是過去時(shí)態(tài)。故leg和broken之間加was。

【7】in the hospital刪去the 考查定冠詞。固定詞組：in the hospital在醫(yī)院里，in hospital在住院。句意：她必須住院（治療）。故in the hospital刪去the。

【8】me改為us 考查代詞。句意：她告訴我們她的傷不嚴(yán)重。故me改為us。

【9】but改為and 考查連詞。分析前后句意可知，兩句不存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，只是一般的并列。故but改為and 。

【10】joy改為joyful或joyous 考查形容詞。句意：我們很快樂，并被深深地感動(dòng)了。根據(jù)句意及句子成分可知，此處應(yīng)使用形容詞作表語。故joy改為joyful或joyous。