Question

13．在英語課上，同學們就白己喜歡的旅游方式展開了討論．請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，匯報討論結果，并談談白己的想法．

方式	觀點
團隊旅游	有導游，不會迷路；不必自己找旅館； …．（考生自擬）
個人旅游	自由安排時間，選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點 …（考生自擬）
你的想法

注意：
1．文章必須包括表中的全部內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；
2．詞數(shù)90左右．短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息．
參考詞匯：travel with a group團隊旅游；travel alone個人旅游；arrange安排
Recently，we have discussed the different ways to go traveling．Here are the results．Some students choose to travel with a group． With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．
For me，I'd like to travel alone，I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是匯報關于自己喜歡的旅游方式的討論結果，并且談談自己的想法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1團隊旅游：有導游，不會迷路．不必自己找旅館．結識朋友，相互幫助．
2個人旅游：自由安排時間．選擇自己喜歡的景點．學會照顧自己．
3．自己的看法
常用到的重點短語：
with one's help在某人的幫助下
get lost 迷路
look for 尋找
make friends交朋友
what's more 再者
look after照顧
spend+時間+doing sth 花時間做某事

【高分句型】
1．①Besides，they can②make friends and help each other③while traveling．
①besides另外
②make friends交朋友
③while traveling省略句，完整表達while thay are traveling．
2．①What's more，②it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．
①what's more 再者
②it是形式主語，后面的to learn to look after themselves．是真正主語
3．For me，①I'd like to travel alone，I want to ②spend enough time visiting the places③I like．
①would like to do sth想要做某事
②spend+時間+doing sth 花時間做某事
③I like是定語從句，修飾先行詞places，關系詞which做賓語省略．

解答 Recently，we have discussed the ways to go traveling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide's help，they won't get lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves．Besides，they can make friends and help each other while traveling．（團隊旅游）【高分句型】However，other students prefer to travel alone．That's because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights．What's more，it's a chance for them to learn to look after themselves．【高分句型】（個人旅游）  
For me，I'd like to travel alone，I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like．【高分句型】In this way，I can enjoy my vacation better．（自己的看法）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點．不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮．要注意主謂一致等問題．寫作中要適當使用連詞，例如本文中的besides，however，what's more等等注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理．