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2．泰山是著名的旅游勝地，每年有大量的游客來此游玩．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中游客以前和現(xiàn)在行為的變化，以"Behave well during the travel"為題，用英語寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽?br />

以前	現(xiàn)在
亂扔雜物，隨地吐痰	廢物入箱，愛惜環(huán)境
摘花毀樹，傷害動(dòng)物	愛護(hù)植物，關(guān)愛動(dòng)物
隨處抽煙，亂涂亂畫	自覺禁煙，保護(hù)名勝
你的感受：作為中學(xué)生，我們…（至少3點(diǎn)）

注意：1．短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；
     2．詞數(shù)80左右，短文題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
     3．文中不得提及考生所在的學(xué)校及自己的姓名；
     4．參考詞匯：行為、舉止：behave；吐痰：spit
Behave well during the travel
TaiMountain is a famous tourist attraction．Every year many tourists comehere to enjoy its beautiful scenery．But a few years ago，a lot of bad behaviors happened quite oftenduring the travel．Some threw litter，painted on the walls，and spit on the ground everywhere．Somepicked flowers，destroyed trees and hurt animals．And even worse，some smoked in the woods．Howdangerous!
Luckily，things have changed now．Rubbish is always put into dustbins．People are friendly toanimals．Nobody smokes around the woods and places of interest are well kept．All these changesmake us happy．As a student，I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment．Inorder to make Huaguo Mountain and our city more beautiful，let's behave well and try our best tohelp fight bad behaviors．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"Behave well during the travel"為題說說游客以前和現(xiàn)在行為的變化以及自己的感受．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1過去（1）亂扔雜物，隨地吐痰；（2）摘花毀樹，傷害動(dòng)物；（3）隨處抽煙，亂涂亂畫
2現(xiàn)在（1）廢物入箱，愛惜環(huán)境；（2）愛護(hù)植物，關(guān)愛動(dòng)物；（3）自覺禁煙，保護(hù)名勝
3你的感受
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
put into 放入
be friendly to  對(duì)…友好
make sb+adj  讓某人怎么樣
in order to 為了…
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．Nobody smokes around the woods①and places of interest②are well kept．
①and連接的兩個(gè)句子．
②一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)：am/is/are+過去分詞
2．As a student，I think①we should know ①it's our duty to protect the environment．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②know后是省略了that的賓語從句．it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語．
3．①In order to②make Huaguo Mountain and our city more beautiful，③let's behave well and④try our best to help fight  bad behaviors．
①in order to 為了…做目的狀語
②make sb+adj  讓某人怎么樣
③let sb do sth 讓某人做某事
④try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事

解答 Behave well during the travel
     Tai Mountain is a famous tourist attraction．Every year many tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery．But a few years ago，a lot of bad behaviors happened quite often during the travel．Some threw litter，painted on the walls，and spit on the ground everywhere．（亂扔雜物，隨地吐痰，亂涂亂畫，）Some picked flowers，destroyed trees and hurt animals．（摘花毀樹，傷害動(dòng)物）And even worse，some smoked in the woods．How dangerous!（隨處抽煙）
     Luckily，things have changed now．Rubbish is always put into dustbins to protect the environment（廢物入箱，愛惜環(huán)境）People are friendly to animals and protect the plants（愛護(hù)植物，關(guān)愛動(dòng)物）Nobody smokes around the woods and places of interest are well kept．【高分句型】（自覺禁煙，保護(hù)名勝）All these changes make us happy．As a student，I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment．【高分句型】In order to make Huaguo Mountain and our city more beautiful，let's behave well and try our best to help fight  bad behaviors．【高分句型】（我的感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇圖表給出材料的作文，圖表中給出的材料較為豐富，本篇文章涉及到兩個(gè)時(shí)態(tài)，考生在寫作時(shí)，圖表內(nèi)容必須包括在內(nèi)．在自己的觀點(diǎn)部分，考生需要自己適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，建議考生在平時(shí)的英語學(xué)習(xí)中積累一些常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語，出彩的發(fā)揮會(huì)給文章增色不少．