Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，向別人介紹一下上個(gè)星期天你和朋友去公園游玩的情況，寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的短文。
1. 公園離你家有5公里遠(yuǎn)，騎自行車(chē)去的
2. 呼吸了新鮮空氣（breathe, fresh）；觀看了動(dòng)物表演；去餐館吃了哪些食物
3. 是美好的一天；很高興
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Answer 1

Last Sunday. I went to the park with my friends. It was a sunny day. The park was five kilometers from my home. So we went there by bike. There were a lot of trees in the park. The air was fresh. I enjoyed it. Then I saw an animal show. It was very interesting. In the afternoon , I was a little hungry. So we went to a restaurant. We ate some delicious food like noodles, dumplings. Later we went home. I was very happy. It was my favourite trip.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，我們只要將這些內(nèi)容正確表達(dá)出來(lái)即可。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)位一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。為了是表達(dá)更有邏輯性，可以使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類(lèi)作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。