Question

3．進入九年級后你在生活和學習方面遇到了哪些困難？你是如何處理這些問題的？你今后準備怎么辦？
請根據(jù)以下要求及表格提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文談談這些方面．
具體要求：1．語言表達準確，短文連貫通順；
2．短文必須包括以下要點提示，可以適當發(fā)揮；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；
4．開頭已給，不記入詞數(shù)．

問題	過去	有很多空閑的時間 作業(yè)很少 …
	現(xiàn)在	很忙 不被允許做… …
解決方法	向…請求幫助 通過…學習
計劃	打算…

提示詞：used to，free time，not be allowed to，ask…for help
My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine．I used to have a lot of free time before．I had time to do things that I liked to do，such as playing football with my friends，going to the movie and so on．And I had little homework to do．So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class．But all these have changed．
Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework．In order to study well，I am not allowed to go to the movie，or to read novels．
I think I need to turn to my teachers for help．They can give me some useful advice．In the future，I think I should plan my time properly．I must balance the study and my hobbies．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是進入九年級后你在生活和學習方面遇到了哪些困難？你是如何處理這些問題的？你今后準備怎么辦？時態(tài)主要為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．問題；1）過去：有很多空閑的時間，作業(yè)很少2）現(xiàn)在：很忙，不被允許做…
2． 解決方法；向…請求幫助；通過…學習
3．計劃
常用到的重點短語：
uesd to do sth過去常常
in order to 為了…
be allowed to do sth 被允許做某事
turn to 轉向
learn to do sth 學會做某事
【高分句型】
1．I had time to do things①that I liked to do，②such as playing football with my friends，going to the movie and so on．
①that是關系詞的定語從句，修飾先行詞things，thay作為從句的賓語．
②such as 例如，and so on  等等
2．So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class．
which作為關系詞的定語從句，修飾先行詞books，介詞from是與learn構成learn from…從…學到，將介詞from提到關系詞which前面，which 作為賓語．此時which不能換成that．
3．Now I am ①so busy that I rarely have time to do other things ②except doing homework．
①so…that，如此…以至于．that引導的結果狀語從句．
②except 介詞，除…之外

解答 My life has changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine． I used to have a lot of free time before．I had time to do things that I liked to do，such as playing football with my friends，going to the movie and so on．【高分句型】And I had little homework to do．（有很多空閑的時間，作業(yè)很少）So I can read many interesting books from which I learned a lot of knowledge out of class．【高分句型】But all these have changed．
Now I am so busy that I rarely have time to do other things except doing homework．【高分句型】In order to study well，I am not allowed to go to the movie，or to read novels．（很忙，不被允許做）
I think I need to turn to my teachers for help．（找老師幫忙）They can give me some useful advice．I think I should learn to plan my time properly．（學會計劃好時間）In the future，I must balance the study and my hobbies．（計劃）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文．材料中已經明確了寫作的要點，寫作時要仔細審題，不能遺漏要點．另外，句子的表達要清晰準確，句子間的邏輯要清楚．這篇作文中會涉及到不同的時間，所以一定要注意時態(tài)，謂語動詞的變化．整篇文章要做到結構清晰，要點明確，表達通順流暢．本文中使用了很多好的短語和復雜的句式．