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18．今年春節(jié)晚會(huì)上，很多人加入了搶紅包游戲活動(dòng)，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂．假如你叫李華，你班最近開(kāi)展了一個(gè)有關(guān)搶紅包游戲活動(dòng)的調(diào)查．請(qǐng)你用英文給學(xué)校�？�《英語(yǔ)園地》寫(xiě)一封信，介紹此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果并談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)．

70%學(xué)生參加搶紅包游戲活動(dòng)
75%學(xué)生表示贊成	1．帶來(lái)更多樂(lè)趣 2．結(jié)識(shí)更多的朋友 3．…
25%學(xué)生表示擔(dān)憂	1．花費(fèi)太多的時(shí)間 2．和家人交流少 3．…
你的觀點(diǎn)…	…

注意：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2．語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)：80左右，信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：搶紅包grabbing red packets
Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of"Grabbing red packets"in our class．
About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class．About 75% of them think it can bring them more fun and they can make more friends．However，about 25% of them are worried about the activity．They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets．Moreover，they don't have enough communication with their family members．As a result，they may feel a little lonely．
I think this game is really exciting，but we should spend more time communicating with our family members．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹搶紅包游戲的調(diào)查的結(jié)果并談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1 70%學(xué)生參加搶紅包游戲活動(dòng)
2 75%學(xué)生表示贊成：帶來(lái)更多樂(lè)趣；結(jié)識(shí)更多的朋友
3.25%學(xué)生表示擔(dān)憂：花費(fèi)太多的時(shí)間；和家人交流少
4．我的觀點(diǎn)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
take part in 參加
make friends 交朋友
be worried about 擔(dān)心
spend+時(shí)間+doing sth 花時(shí)間做某事
【高分句型】
1．About 75% of them think①it can bring them more fun ②and they can make more friends．
①think后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句
②and連接兩個(gè)句子．make friends 交朋友
2．Moreover，they don't have enough communication with their family members．
moreover此外，引出下一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)
3．I think ①this game is really exciting，②but we should spend more time communicating with our family members
①think后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句
②but但是，表轉(zhuǎn)折．
spend+時(shí)間+doing sth 花時(shí)間做某事

解答 Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of"Grabbing red packets"in our class．About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class．（70%學(xué)生參加搶紅包游戲活動(dòng)）About 75% of them think it can bring them more fun and they can make more friends．【高分句型】However，about 25% of them are worried about the activity．They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets．Moreover，they don't have enough communication with their family members．【高分句型】As a result，they may feel a little lonely．
I think this game is really exciting，but we should spend more time communicating with our family members．【高分句型】
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本圖表所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并需有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意句式的多樣性，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂觅e語(yǔ)從句，轉(zhuǎn)折詞however，連詞and等．考生可在作文之前對(duì)每部分列出大致的提綱，做到主題明確，條理清楚．可以根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開(kāi)做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語(yǔ)法或詞匯的錯(cuò)誤．