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11．難忘的初中生活即將結(jié)束，三年來你成長了，進步了，收獲了．請根據(jù)下列提示準備一份80詞的發(fā)言稿，稿件的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出．

以前	易怒，喜歡和人爭論．
現(xiàn)在	將大部分的精力投入到學(xué)習(xí)中，在學(xué)習(xí)上已經(jīng)取得 了很大的進步．能很耐心的輔導(dǎo)同學(xué)的作業(yè)．加入Helping Hands Club已有兩年．經(jīng)常為貧困地區(qū)的兒童募集書本．
愿望	…

注意：發(fā)言稿中必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫．
你的愿望需要用2至3句話作適當發(fā)揮．詞數(shù)80個左右，發(fā)言稿開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．發(fā)言稿中不準出現(xiàn)真實校名和姓名．
Dear teachers and friends，
How time flies!I'm happy to be here to share my happiness and progress with you．I used to get angry easily and liked to argue with others．Now I put most of my effort into my study．So I have made great progress in my study．I am patient enough to help my classmates with their homework．I have been in Helping Hands Club for two years．I often raise some books for the children in poor areas．I want to enter No.1 High School this year．I hope my dream can come true．
That's all for my speech．Thank you for listening．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是說說自己三年的變化和對未來的展望．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時、一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．以前；易怒，喜歡和人爭論．
2．現(xiàn)在；將大部分的精力投入到學(xué)習(xí)中，在學(xué)習(xí)上已經(jīng)取得了很大的進步．能很耐心的輔導(dǎo)同學(xué)的作業(yè)．加入Helping Hands Club已有兩年．經(jīng)常為貧困地區(qū)的兒童募集書本．
3．愿望…

常用到的重點短語：
used to do sth 過去常常
put effort into  把精力投入
make progress 進步
help sb with sth 讓某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．I ①used to get angry easily and liked to ②argue with others．
①used to do sth 過去常常
②argue with sb  與某人爭論
2．I am ①patient enough to ②help my classmates with their homework．
①adj+enough to do sth 足夠怎么樣去做某事
②help sb with sth 讓某人做某事
3．I hope my dream can come true．
hope后是省略了that的賓語從句．

解答 Dear teachers and friends，
How time flies!I'm happy to be here to share my happiness and progress with you．I used to get angry easily and liked to argue with others．【高分句型】（易怒，喜歡和人爭論）Now I put most of my effort into my study．So I have made great progress in my study．（將大部分的精力投入到學(xué)習(xí)中，在學(xué)習(xí)上已經(jīng)取得了很大的進步）I am patient enough to help my classmates with their homework．【高分句型】（能很耐心的輔導(dǎo)同學(xué)的作業(yè)）I have been in Helping Hands Club for two years．I often raise some books for the children in poor areas．（加入Helping Hands Club已有兩年．經(jīng)常為貧困地區(qū)的兒童募集書本）I want to enter No.1 High School this year．I hope my dream can come true【高分句型】．（愿望）
That's all for my speech．Thank you for listening．

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全．動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題．寫作中注意將以前的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己介紹清楚，并介紹一下自己的愿望．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文涉及過去現(xiàn)在和將來三種時態(tài)的表達，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致等問題．寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．