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中考將近，而9年級(jí)學(xué)生Daniel卻遇到了一些問(wèn)題，準(zhǔn)備向21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)的“知心大姐”欄目反映一下，并希望得到幫助．（14分）
假設(shè)你是Daniel．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給該報(bào)“知心大姐”欄目寫(xiě)一封信，希望得到幫助．問(wèn)題如下：
(1)作業(yè)太多，時(shí)常熬夜，感到疲勞，尤其是在課堂里就想睡覺(jué)；
(2)不知如何處理學(xué)習(xí)與課余活動(dòng)之間的矛盾，感到焦慮；
(3)有時(shí)甚至與朋友爭(zhēng)吵，感覺(jué)不開(kāi)心；
(4)父母只關(guān)心考試分?jǐn)?shù)，很少與自己交流，也不關(guān)心自己的感受．
注意：
(1)80詞左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
(2)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文通順連貫．
Dear agony aunt，
I’m a Grade 9 student．These days I have some problems，and I don’t know how to deal with them．
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Can you offer me some suggestions? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Daniel

Answer 1

Dear agony aunt，
I’m a Grade 9 student．These days I have some problems，and I don’t know how to deal with them．
First I have a lot of homework to do every day, so I often stay up late to complete it.  As a result, I feel tired. Second, I don’t know how to achieve a balance between study and play, That’s why I feel stressed from time to time. What’s worse, I sometimes quarrel with my friends, and that makes me feel bad. Besides, my parents care only about the marks and we seldom communicate with each other.
Can you offer me some suggestions? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Daniel

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目所給要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要把每個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來(lái)，當(dāng)然也可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞，使上下文緊湊，密切關(guān)聯(lián)。本文可以第一人稱書(shū)寫(xiě)，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】該文使用了first、second、what’s more、besides等詞，為文章增色不少。