Question

請以 “My dream home”為題，按以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫一篇80字左右的短文
1.我與父母一起住在一個(gè)小城鎮(zhèn)；我們的公寓在四樓
2有三個(gè)臥室、一個(gè)客廳、一個(gè)廚房和一個(gè)浴室；我有自己的臥室
3.我家周圍有超市、飯館、醫(yī)院等。鄰居很友好和樂于助人。
4.每周六，我們在社區(qū)中心舉行“援助之手”會。那兒的醫(yī)生和護(hù)士幫助生病的人，工程師幫助我們修洗衣機(jī)、冰箱等。生活在這樣的街區(qū)是幸福的。
注意：（1）要點(diǎn)清楚，語言流暢，字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右
（2）短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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Answer 1

John is the only son of his father.Usually his father’s driver drives him to school in his father’s beautiful car.Then he takes John’s father to his office.One evening his father tells him that he has to go to the airport early the next day,so he would need the car at the same time when John has to go to school.He says that John’s mother has another car.But she would still be in bed when he has to leave the house.
“Oh,well,how will I go to school if you need your car and Mum is still in bed?”John asks.His father wants to teach him a lesson about how difficult the life is for the poor people in the world,so he answers, “You will go in the same way as every other child in the world…go in a taxi.”

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料比較具體，動筆前應(yīng)認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞或句子從而做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文用了好的一些短語或句式，如：Usually his father’s driver drives him to school in his father’s beautiful car. he would need the car at the same time when John has to go to school及His father wants to teach him a lesson about how difficult the life is for the poor people in the world同時(shí)短文也用了一些連詞如：when、if、and或so等。提醒考生學(xué)生平時(shí)注意積累一些短語和句式。