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10．現(xiàn)在有些學生缺乏"感恩"意識，對待家人、朋友、老師等很冷漠，而且行為方式和價值觀令人擔憂．請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，以"Learn to express thanks"為題，用英語寫一篇演講稿．

學生現(xiàn)狀	認為父母供他們吃好穿好是應該的，不知道感恩．
為什么要感恩	一個人的成長離不開社會、父母、老師和朋友的幫助．
怎么感恩	…（至少兩點）

要求：
1．演講稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名及能夠透露你個人身份的信息；
2．詞數(shù)：90單詞左右．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is"Learn to express thanks"．Nowdays some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school．They think they must be comfortable，but they don't show any sense of"Thanks"．
I don't think it is right．We are lucky in everything．We can have a chance to receive good education because of society，And It's our parents who support us and love us very much．Besides，it is our teachers who teach us much knowledge．Our friends share joy with us and give us courage to overcome many difficulties．
We must learn to express thanks to them．At present，we should be polite to our teachers and parents．If it is possible，we'll try to help others when they are in trouble．As a student，we must study hard in order to make a contribution to our country in the future．a(chǎn)nd only when we succeed in our jobs can we better reward our parents，teachers and so on．
Thanksforyourlistening!
Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是以"Learn to express thanks"為題談談當前缺乏感恩的現(xiàn)狀以及如何感恩父母，老師，朋友．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1． 背景：認為吃好穿好是應該的，缺失感恩意識．
2．學會感恩 1）．感謝父母供養(yǎng)（support）自己上學．
2）．感謝老師教給我們許多知識．
3）．感謝朋友給予我們鼓勵和幫助
3．怎么感恩（至少兩點）
常用到的重點短語：
share…with sb 與某人分享
be polite to sb 對某人禮貌
try  to do sth 盡力做某事
in order to 為了…
【高分句型】
1．And It's our parents who support us and love us very much．
who作為關系代詞的定語從句，修飾先行詞parents，關系詞做從句的主語．
2．①If it is possible，we'll②try to help others③when they are in trouble．
①if 引導的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②try  to do sth 盡力做某事
③when引導的時間狀語從句，in trouble 處于困境
3．As a student，we must study hard①in order to make a contribution to our country in the future．a(chǎn)nd ②only when we succeed in our jobs can we better reward our parents，teachers and so on．
①in order to 為了…做目的狀語．
②only+從句，放句首引起倒裝．

解答 Good morning，boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is"Learn to express thanks"． Nowdays some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school．They think they must be comfortable，but they don't show any sense of"Thanks"．（認為吃好穿好是應該的，缺失感恩意識）
I don't think it is right．We are lucky in everything．We can have a chance to receive good education because of society，And It's our parents who support us and love us very much．【高分句型】（感謝父母供養(yǎng)自己上學．）Besides，it is our teachers who teach us much knowledge．（感謝老師教給我們許多知識）Our friends share joy with us and give us courage to overcome many difficulties．（感謝朋友給予我們鼓勵和幫助）
We must learn to express thanks to them．At present，we should be polite to our teachers and parents．If it is possible，we'll try to help others when they are in trouble．【高分句型】As a student，we must study hard in order to make a contribution to our country in the future．a(chǎn)nd only when we succeed in our jobs can we better reward our parents，teachers and so on．【高分句型】（怎么感恩）
Thanks for your listening!

點評 這是一篇利用表格的給材料作文．本文所給材料比較詳細：當前缺乏感恩的現(xiàn)狀，如何感恩父母，老師，朋友．對未來的打算．根據(jù)內容我們可以分三個段落分去寫．本文主要應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作中注意時態(tài)及時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．
使用適當?shù)倪B詞及短語，為文章增色不少．學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理．