只允許修改10處.多者不記分.Dear Tom,Your letter of April 8 reaches me yesterday. Now I want to tell you why I want to be volunteer teacher after graduation. As you know, I was born into a poor family. So I understand what hard a life the children in the poor areas lives. I want to be a volunteer teacher there but make every effort to help them accept a good education. Don’t worry about my parents attitude. I can persuade them to agree with me. I will leave college after a few months and my dream of become a teacher will come true. Are you going to work in the city which your parents live?Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是李華.現(xiàn)在是一名高中學(xué)生.請給你的初中外籍英語老師Miss Green寫一封信.主要內(nèi)容如下: 查看更多

 

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增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧),并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一條橫線(_),并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
Dear Joe,
I’m sorry to hear that you want to give up apply for a volunteer for the 2013 National
Games. In my opinion, you’d better not give up this idea.
On the one hand, you have many advantage. First of all, you are good at communicating
others and ready to help others. In addition to, you are familiar with Shenyang. Secondly, be
a volunteer can broaden your outlook and improved yourself, that will be beneficial to your
future work and life. Therefore, I sincere hope you can seize this chance and try your best to
be a outstanding volunteer. Please consider my advice. I’m really looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Jane

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請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加,刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:1,每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2,只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不記分。
Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I
scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,
since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized
however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and
shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to
helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel
every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

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請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加,刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1,每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2,只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不記分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming andshouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready tohelping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

 

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請修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加,刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1,每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2,只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不記分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I

scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,

since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized

however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and

shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to

helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel

every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

 

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請你修改一下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Last November a English forum was held in Busan International High School of South Korea. Students from eight country took part in the forum representing their schools. I was one of the students in our school who was lucky enough to attend it. At the opening ceremony of the forum, students from Busan International High School play a lot of Korean traditional instruments, some of them were really new to us. The forum was very succeed. Every team did a good job and they highly thought of. During our stay in Korea, what impressed on us most was that Koreans love eating kimchi very much. Besides, in my opinion, it isn’t as deliciously as I had imagined.

 

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Dear Tom,

Your letter of April 8 reaches me yesterday. Now I want to tell you why I want to be ^

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volunteer teacher after graduation. As you know, I was born into a poor family. So I understand what hard a life the children in the poor areas lives. I want to be a volunteer
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teacher there but make every effort to help them accept a good education. Don’t worry about
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my parents attitude. I can persuade them to agree with me. I will leave college after a few
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months and my dream of become a teacher will come true. Are you going to work in the city

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which your parents live?

where

Best wishes!

                                                             Yours,

                          Li Ming

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One possible version:

Dear Miss Green,

I don’t know if you still remember me. I am Li Hua, the girl who used to let you down. It was your sweet smile that made me fall in love with English. Now I am a senior high school student. English is still one of my favorite subjects. When I was in junior middle school, I liked English very much, but in spite of this, my English didn’t improve a lot. Just when I was going to give it up, you had a talk with me. You said that I should continue working hard and I would be successful sooner or later. Thank you for your encouragement. Now my English is getting better and better. After graduation, I want to major in English at university.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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