Question

請(qǐng)你修改一下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last November a English forum was held in Busan International High School of South Korea. Students from eight country took part in the forum representing their schools. I was one of the students in our school who was lucky enough to attend it. At the opening ceremony of the forum, students from Busan International High School play a lot of Korean traditional instruments, some of them were really new to us. The forum was very succeed. Every team did a good job and they highly thought of. During our stay in Korea, what impressed on us most was that Koreans love eating kimchi very much. Besides, in my opinion, it isn’t as deliciously as I had imagined.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 a→an

 country→countries

 was→were

 play→played

 play后加with

 succeed→successful

 they后加were

 去掉on

 Besides→However

 deliciously→delicious

【解析】

  第一句中English為元音讀音開(kāi)頭應(yīng)用不定冠詞an修飾。

 country前有表數(shù)量的詞eight后應(yīng)用名詞復(fù)數(shù)。

 關(guān)系代詞who替代先行詞students作定語(yǔ)從句的主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。

 上下文時(shí)態(tài)一致，全篇都為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，此處應(yīng)用play的過(guò)去式。

 play表玩耍意思時(shí)為不及物動(dòng)詞，加with在這里表示“用…工具”。

 此句構(gòu)成主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，系動(dòng)詞后加形容詞，succeed詞性為動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)變?yōu)閟uccessful。

 they highly thought of 應(yīng)為“他們被高度評(píng)價(jià)”，為被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)缺少were。

 impress本身就是及物動(dòng)詞，其后直接加賓語(yǔ)無(wú)需介詞。

 上下文為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，應(yīng)用however。

 is后應(yīng)加形容詞deliciously為副詞，需變?yōu)樾稳菰~delicious。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文糾錯(cuò)