Question

校學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦義賣活動(dòng)以資助貧困地區(qū)的兒童上學(xué)。請(qǐng)你寫一份通知，內(nèi)容包括：
?介紹活動(dòng)的目的；
?號(hào)召大家踴躍捐獻(xiàn)不用的物品，并參加義賣活動(dòng)；
?義賣時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)：周六上午9點(diǎn)，校階梯教室。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 參考詞匯：義賣charity sale；階梯教室lecture hall。
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Answer 1

                               NOTICE
The Students’ Union of our school is scheduled to hold a charity sale on Saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken area. The efforts to be made are to support these children to continue their school education.
You are kindly asked to donate some of your items which you don’t use but might be of some use to others，such as some school supplies and used textbooks.
At 9 am this Saturday，the charity sale starts at the lecture hall of our school. We are expecting you to come and offer a helpful hand. And remember all the money will go to the support of those needy children.

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一份通知。在寫作時(shí)要注意此類通知的格式，通常上方正中寫Notice或NOTICE（通知），發(fā)出通知的單位名稱可放在正文前，也可放在正文后，右下角處。一般通知的開頭要交代清楚活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容、對(duì)象、時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。在句式寫法上必須注意以下幾點(diǎn)：①盡可能用精煉的文字表達(dá)明確的信息，多用簡(jiǎn)單句或短句、單句，以避免繁雜；②通知往往著重對(duì)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容、對(duì)象進(jìn)行說明，多用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，如“The class meeting will be held…”(班會(huì)將舉行……)等等；③通知中所告知的事情大部分是未進(jìn)行的，故多用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文要點(diǎn)全面，形式上完全符合通知文體的要求，首先在開頭交代清楚活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容、對(duì)象、時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。從形式上看，通知的幾大部分一應(yīng)俱全。如標(biāo)題部分是NOTICE；正文部分中的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容是“to hold a charity sale on Saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken area. T”；參加的方式和要求及參加這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的對(duì)象是“our school”，該活動(dòng)的時(shí)間是“At 9am�！�；此外文章的語言表述簡(jiǎn)練流暢、措辭得當(dāng)、文章內(nèi)容上下銜接緊湊。