Question

下文共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
One afternoon, while I was doing my homework, then suddenly I heard someone knocking at the door. I rose my head, looking out of the window to see who it was. A man of about 50 broad shoulders and glasses were standing on the door steps. He was tall, wearing in an old army coat. He grew a wild beard. A big black hat was pulling forward over his eyes so that it was hard to see her face clearly. His shoes were old but worn out. It was a big hole in one of his socks. He had with him a black  box in one hand. Only after I took a few more closer looks at him I recognize that he was my neighbor ten years ago.

Answer 1

【小題1】then 去掉
【小題2】rose --- raised
【小題3】50之后加with
【小題4】 were ---- was
【小題5】in去掉
【小題6】pulling ---- pulled
【小題7】her --- his
【小題8】.but----and
【小題9】It ---- There
【小題10】I前加did

解析試題分析：文章介紹作者在做作業(yè)的時候，發(fā)現(xiàn)有人敲門，結(jié)果看見一個陌生的男子，仔細(xì)的看了他幾眼才認(rèn)出這是他10年前的鄰居。
【小題1】當(dāng)我在作業(yè)的時候，我聽到有人敲門。While引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，后面是主句，then 去掉
【小題2】我抬起頭，看看是誰。Rise是不及物動詞， raise是及物動詞，raise one’s head抬起頭
【小題3】一個50來歲的有著寬闊肩膀戴眼鏡的男子站在門口。50之后加with，用with介詞短語做定語。
【小題4】主語是A man of about 50 broad shoulders and glasses中心詞是a man謂語用單數(shù)： were ---- was
【小題5】他很高戴著一個軍帽。Wear是及物動詞，in去掉
【小題6】一個大的黑色的帽子被向前拉遮住了眼睛。A hat和pull是被動關(guān)系，用pulled
【小題7】因為這是一個男的，用形容詞性物主代詞his
【小題8】.他的鞋子很舊也破了。這兩個形容詞是并列關(guān)系：but----and
【小題9】襪子上有一個大洞。用There be句型：It ---- There
【小題10】只有在我更仔細(xì)的看了他幾眼我才認(rèn)出這是我10年前的鄰居。Only+時間狀語從句，后面的主句用部分倒裝：I前加did
考點：考查短文改錯