Question

Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many people standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd and I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give hand when someone else is in need.

Answer 1

【小題1】usually→usual
【小題2】while→when
【小題3】hear→heard
【小題4】shocking→shocked
【小題5】people后加were
【小題6】去掉had
【小題7】but→and
【小題8】his→my
【小題9】proud后加of
【小題10】give 后加a

解析試題分析：本文講述的去年夏天在少年宮讀書時(shí)聽(tīng)到有人落水而勇救落水兒童的故事呼吁大家：我希望當(dāng)別人需要幫助的時(shí)候大家都伸出援助之手。
【小題1】考查形容詞副詞。根據(jù)固定短語(yǔ)：as usual 像往常一樣，所以u(píng)sually改成usual
【小題2】考查固定句型。根據(jù)固定句型：sb was/were doing sth when …某人正在做某事這時(shí)突然。。。，所以while改成when。
【小題3】考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文開(kāi)頭第一句：Last weekend …,確定了本文講述的是上周末發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)該是過(guò)去時(shí)，所以hear 改成heard。
【小題4】考查區(qū)分形容詞�！璭d 的形容詞意為“人感到。。。�！薄璱ng 的形容詞意為“令人…”,本句為我感到震驚而不是令人震驚，所以shocking改成shocked.
【小題5】考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。根據(jù)while判定本句是狀語(yǔ)從句，我感到震驚，一個(gè)小孩在水中掙扎，然而許多人卻站在那兒袖手旁觀，站在那兒是謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞所以加上were構(gòu)成過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)。
【小題6】考查時(shí)態(tài)。had done 過(guò)去完成時(shí)，表過(guò)去的過(guò)去，而本句表示的過(guò)去的情況，應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以去掉had。
【小題7】考查連詞。根據(jù)上下句：我毫不猶豫的擠出人群脫下衣服，跳進(jìn)水里。脫下衣服和跳進(jìn)水里是順承關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以把but改成and。
【小題8】考查代詞。根據(jù)句意應(yīng)該是：使我如釋重負(fù)的是，那個(gè)孩子得救了。是我如釋重負(fù)而不是他，所以his改成my。
【小題9】考查固定短語(yǔ)。根據(jù)固定短語(yǔ)：be proud of 以。。。為自豪，句意：我以我做的事情為自豪，所以在proud后加of .
【小題10】考查冠詞。句意：我希望當(dāng)別人需要幫助的時(shí)候大家都伸出援助之手。固定短語(yǔ)：give sb a hand 幫助某人，所以在give后加a .
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。