Question

你的英語(yǔ)老師要求你在班上用英文向同學(xué)們介紹你英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的方法和心得。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的中文提綱，選擇相關(guān)的信息寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。

學(xué)習(xí)方法	學(xué)習(xí)效果
背誦范文	運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維，進(jìn)行模仿性寫(xiě)作
多閱讀英文文章	吸取語(yǔ)言材料
多聽(tīng)英文廣播	提高聽(tīng)力水平
學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)法	正確表達(dá)
多寫(xiě)日記	在做中學(xué)
多練習(xí)口語(yǔ)	提高口頭技能
參考他人的習(xí)作	取長(zhǎng)補(bǔ)短

【寫(xiě)作要求】   1. 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
3. 開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing.
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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

Ladies and gentlemen,
Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing.
Firstly, I often recite beautiful English articles, which help me think in English when I imitate English writing. Secondly, I also read English articles widely so that I can take in as many language materials as possible. Thirdly, in order to express myself correctly / make myself understood, I think it is important to learn some grammar, listen to the radio and practice speaking English a lot. Fourthly, I keep a diary every day so that I can learn by writing. Besides / In addition, I often refer to others’ articles to know what I need and what I can learn from others.
That’s all. Thank you.

試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用到一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)in order to 為了；make myself understood,使自己被理解/明白；keep a diary記日記； listen to聽(tīng)； refer to查閱；Firstly, I often recite beautiful English articles, which help me think in English when I imitate English writing這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。Thirdly, in order to express myself correctly / make myself understood, I think it is important to learn some grammar, listen to the radio and practice speaking English a lot.這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到目的狀語(yǔ)，it is adj to do sth 這個(gè)句型結(jié)構(gòu)。Besides / In addition, I often refer to others’ articles to know what I need and what I can learn from others.這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到連詞還有what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。