【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last week our class voted on how to do for you class outing: visit the Singapore Zoo and go to the Night Safari(夜間動物園). We girls wanted to go to the zoo, but since we are in minority, we lost to the boys, that all wanted the safari. We got the admission rate for the students, which was great since I still had not enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as something at the souvenir shops. The safari was scary(嚇人的)but real fun. As we took the ride across the park’s dark jungle, we could see the eyes of many creatures look at us. Most of the animal there sleep when there sunlight and wake up at night.

【答案】

【解析】本文主要講述在一次班級活動中,女生票數(shù)不敵男生,最終全班一起去了夜間動物園的事情,雖然夜間動物園很嚇人,但是很有趣。

“Last week our class voted on how to do for you class outing”,分析句子結(jié)構(gòu),vote on為動詞短語, to do for you class outing為從句,且從句缺少主語,故將how 改為what 。

“visit the Singapore Zoo and go to the Night Safari(夜間動物園)”,根據(jù)前文的投票,可知是在兩者之間進(jìn)行選擇,故將and 改為or。

“We girls wanted to go to the zoo, but since we are in minority, we lost to the boys”,根據(jù)wanted可知,句子時態(tài)為過去時態(tài),故將are改為were。

“we lost to the boys, that all wanted the safari”,分析句子結(jié)構(gòu),we lost to the boys為主句,all wanted the safari為從句,all指代boys,主句與從句之間用逗號隔開,應(yīng)使用非限制性定語從句,故將that改為which。

“We got the admission rate for the students, which was great”,分析句子結(jié)構(gòu),先行詞為主語We,故將which改為who。

“since I still had not enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as something at the souvenir shops”,根據(jù)buy a brochure about the park as well as something at the souvenir shops我買了小冊子還有一些紀(jì)念品,可知作者還是有錢的,故將not刪掉。

“ The safari was scary(嚇人的)but real fun”,fun為形容詞,應(yīng)使用副詞修飾,故將real改為really。

“As we took the ride across the park’s dark jungle”,through強(qiáng)調(diào)從人群或物體中間穿過,across指在某一空間從一端到另一端或呈十字交叉穿過,本句講的是從公園中穿過,故將across改為through。

“we could see the eyes of many creatures look at us”,see sb/sth doing sth 看見某人/物正在做某事,故將look改為looking。

“Most of the animal there sleep when there sunlight and wake up at night”,根據(jù)most of大多數(shù),后面加可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式,故將animal改為animals。

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