Question

20．假設你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter寫信詢問中國目前火爆的共享單車（bicycles sharing）是怎么回事，請您根據(jù)要求寫一封回信，向他簡單介紹一下．內容要點包括：
1．下載APP，通過手機掃描二維碼（scan QR code），付費使用；
2．路邊停放即可，非常方便．但有時也出現(xiàn)亂停亂放現(xiàn)彖；
3．你的觀點．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
I am glad to hear from you．I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of bicycles sharing mentioned in your latest letter．
It's very convenient to use if you have a smartphone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip（高分句型一）．
Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well（高分句型二）．However，some mobikes are parked improperly by people．I hope it will be avoided as soon as possible after measures are taken．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip
你要做的是通過APP找到最近MOBIKE、掃描QR碼在自行車上，享受您的旅行．
高分句型二：
It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．
它正成為一種新的趨勢，作為一種交通工具，從而緩解交通壓力，有利于環(huán)境．

解答 Dear Peter，
      I am glad to hear from you．I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of bicycles sharing mentioned in your latest letter．
      It's very convenient to use if you have a smartphone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip（高分句型一）．
      Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well（高分句型二）．However，some mobikes are parked improperly by people．I hope it will be avoided as soon as possible after measures are taken．
                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．