文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線,在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞。

2、只允許修改10處,多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

I often dream of a teacher. I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Only by this way can you be a good teacher and win respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true.

 

【答案】

 

 第一句of后加being/becoming

 第二句give改為giving

 第三句but改為and

 第四句was改為am

 第五句there改為it

 第七句knowledges改為knowledge

 第七句learn改為teach

 第八句him改為them

 第九句by改為in

 第十句去掉as

【解析】

試題分析：文章作者與室友相處不好，就這個問題向瑪麗征求建議。

 這里想說我經(jīng)常夢想著成為一名教師。dream of后接動詞ing形式。

 and連接了并列結(jié)構(gòu)，dream of后接動詞ing形式。

 這里是并列關(guān)系，意思是我教他們。

 主句用一般現(xiàn)在時，從句也要用一般現(xiàn)在時。

 to be a teacher是真正的賓語，這里需要一個形式賓語，所以用it。

 knowledge是不可數(shù)名詞，所以第七句knowledges改為knowledge。

 這里想說沒有足夠的知識，你永遠(yuǎn)不會教好。所以第七句learn改為teach。

 這里想說另外，你必須是你的學(xué)生們的朋友，并且好好的照顧他們，所以第八句him改為them。

 這里想說只有以這種方式，你才能成為一名好老師，并且贏得學(xué)生的尊重，所以第九句by改為in。

 這里想說盡管現(xiàn)在我是一名學(xué)生，我會努力的工作使我的夢想變?yōu)楝F(xiàn)實(shí)，所以第十句去掉as。

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