Question

假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生畢勝，平時(shí)酷愛(ài)英語(yǔ)，經(jīng)常讀英文報(bào)紙，你從English Mirror上得知該英文報(bào)紙準(zhǔn)備招聘數(shù)名兼職小記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一封100詞左右的求職信。申請(qǐng)理由：
1. 你良好的英語(yǔ)水平；
2. 該報(bào)對(duì)你的影響；
3. 應(yīng)聘的其他優(yōu)勢(shì)及你的迫切心情。
注意書(shū)信格式，（不用寫(xiě)地址和日期）
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Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam:/ Dear Editor,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for a part-time journalist.
I am a Senior Two student now and my favorite subject is English. I’m good at reading and writing in English. I fell in love with your newspaper the first time I read the name of it English Mirror. I’m especially interested in the articles written by students. I’m eager to get the chance to practice writing in English. If I can become a member of your staff, I will work hard to find news around us students and share advice with the readers to help improve the quality of the paper.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Bi Sheng

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。要求寫(xiě)封求職信，應(yīng)聘兼職小記者要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。句式上要富有變化，簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)雜句結(jié)合使用，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I am a Senior Two student now and my favorite subject is English. I’m good at reading and writing in English. I fell in love with your newspaper the first time I read the name of it English Mirror.這句話用the first time連接時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句， I’m especially interested in the articles written by students.這句話用過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)， I’m eager to get the chance to practice writing in English. If I can become a member of your staff, I will work hard to find news around us students and share advice with the readers to help improve the quality of the paper.這兩句話都用了不定式。I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.這句話用了動(dòng)名詞做賓語(yǔ)。