Question

假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)高三(1)班學(xué)生李華。下面是你校布告欄里張貼的“征集接待家庭”的通知，請(qǐng)根據(jù)其內(nèi)容用英語寫一封申請(qǐng)信。詞數(shù)不少于100。

注意：信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。

HOST FAMILIES WANTED Some foreign teachers and students from an American high school will study in our school during the summer vacation. Host families are wanted to accommodate our friends. REQUIREMENTS: ◇ Good English. ◇ A SEPARATE room. ◇ transportation. ◇ … If interested, please send your APPLICATION IN ENGLISH to the International Department before SATURDAY. Please consult us for any further information.

 

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three.                                     

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three. I’m writing in reply to the notice for host families. I think I have several reasons to accommodate one foreign friend. First, I believe my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners. Also, my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others. As for accommodation, my family live in a 4-room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest. In addition, my home is very convenient in transportation. Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places. I have also got support from my parents, who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish.

I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查書信類作文，要求寫一封自薦信，是關(guān)于征集接待家庭的，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，是以通知的形式給出，寫作前要讀懂讀透通知內(nèi)容，包括語言，住宿和交通的情況做出說明，審題時(shí)注意本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文里面的Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places.和 I have also got support from my parents, who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish.還有要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來：象also, In addition,,等等。

考點(diǎn)：考查書信類短文寫作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。