Question

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在生活中有人喜歡運動，也有人不太運動。請你以“Is sport really good for us?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：
1.有人認為運動能強身健體，陶冶情操（如培養(yǎng)合作精神等）但也有人認為運動并非是強身健體的唯一形式（如飲食也很重要）；運動容易造成傷害，挫折等
2.你的看法及理由
注意：詞數(shù)：100-120 文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。
Is sport really good for us?
Some think sport does us good in many ways.                     ____________
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Answer 1

Some think sport does us good in many ways. Not only does sport help people to stay fit and healthy, but the competition and teamwork in sport give people a lot of motivation to keep going .  However , 0thers believe that sport is not the only way to do this. Eating well is a big part of a healthy life. On the other hand, sport can actually be dangerous. Millions of people are hurt playing sport each year.
From my perspective , sport teaches us big lessons for life. Most sports involve teamwork and teach us how to get along with others, how to work together to achieve a common goal, and about trust and responsibility. Truly, some sports do not suit some people, but there are so many possible choices that everyone can find a sport to enjoy.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是“Is sport really good for us?”，給出了大部分要點，還要考生給出自己的觀點。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是運動的好處；，然后指出過度運動的壞處；最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體。
點評：本文屬于正反方觀點作文，但是要點給出的不算多，需要考生自己添加部分。在分析部分已經(jīng)詳細說明了。在寫作的時候要適合合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級的詞匯和句型，讓文章有變化，有層次。