Question

假定你是李華，你校與美國一所友好學(xué)校決定通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)開展跨文化交流活動(dòng)(Cross  Cultural Communication Project)。請(qǐng)你用郵件與美方聯(lián)系，談?wù)勛约旱脑O(shè)想，征求對(duì)方意見。
交流內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：   
1．自我介紹；
2．飲食文化差異； 
3．中學(xué)教育；  
4．語言學(xué)習(xí)體會(huì)。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 
Hi Mark，
Hope all is well．
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Hi Mark,
Hope all is well. I’d like to take this opportunity to share my plan with you on our Cross Cultural Communication Project.
To be practical, we can have four aspects in our communication. First, a brief self introduction is needed. Then, as students in both sides are interested in foreign students’ life, food culture sharing will surely be the most popular. In addition, each one is expected to describe the education that they are having in their own countries. Last but not least, exchange of skills for language study may be of great value to both sides. 
That’s all. I’m open to your suggestions and expecting your plan. Only with joined efforts can the project be a great success. (115 words)

解析試題分析：本文屬于應(yīng)用文中的書信類書面表達(dá)，審題后可知，主要介紹通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)開展跨文化交流活動(dòng)，文章的要點(diǎn)只是給出了提綱，不能僅僅翻譯，要適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，可以分三段來寫。1．自我介紹； 2．飲食文化差異； 3．中學(xué)教育； 4．語言學(xué)習(xí)體會(huì)。表達(dá)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述�？梢赃m當(dāng)使用諺語，如：each one is expected to describe the education that they are having in their own countries.和Only with joined efforts can the project be a great success. 還有在把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來的時(shí)候要用到關(guān)聯(lián)詞：first，second，besides，last but not least等。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于書信，也是提綱類短文的一種，根據(jù)文章的要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，難度不大，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。